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Collected Triolets by *YvesMB:iconYvesMB:



There are some stories I can’t tell.
You are too old for fairytales.
You are too old for carousels.
There are some stories I can’t tell.
You father said he wished you well.
He said the card is in the mail.
There are some stories I can’t tell.
You are too old for fairytales.

It’s hard pretending not to care.
Your smile is worn on mannequins.
I’m sure I saw one wear your hair.
It’s hard pretending not to care
That you are standing, silent, there
And separation is glass thin.
It’s hard pretending not to care.
You smile is worn on mannequins.

You didn’t hear me when
I said I loved you. Once
I mentioned it again.
You didn’t hear me. When
You laughed I knew right then
I had to change my stance.
You didn’t hear me when
I said, I loved you once.

The bees attack an orchid bloom,
The hornets laugh and then they glower
And then they start mixing bee tombs.
The bees attack an orchid bloom
But merely buzz their foolish doom,
The hive descends on purple flowers.
The bees attack an orchid bloom,
The hornets laugh and then they glower

I take your dead heart up a tree
Away from jackals and hyenas,
Away from other leopard’s jealousy.
I take your dead heart up a tree.
My stomach double-flips with glee.
The dried blood forms a sweet patina.
I take your dead heart up a tree,
Away from jackals and hyenas.


Bo peep has lost her sheep again.
What will her father say this time.
Perhaps, "you silly girl," and then,
"Bo peep has lost her sheep again."
The wolf cooks lambs in his dark den
With lemon, butter, sprigs of thyme.
Bo peep has lost her sheep again.
What will her father say this time.

I promise you will have them back.
O Jack give me you magic beans
Or I will place you in a sack
I promise you will have them back
And just in time before the lack
Of narrative becomes obscene.
I promise you will have them back.
O Jack give me your magic beans.


Humpty Dumpty please don’t cry.
These words won’t break you like the ground.
Stay here with me my son, oh my
Humpty Dumpty—please don’t cry.
But mother, mother, oh the sky
Keeps calling and I love the sound.
Humpty Dumpty please don’t cry.
These words won’t break you like the ground.

so like a transposed melody
nobody knows your secret smile
the one you only use for me
so like a transposed melody
that shifts me to a brighter key
the same but different for a while
so like a transposed melody
nobody knows your secret smile

I’m singing in my sleep your name.
I wake to sing you through the day.
My girl’s upset and you’re to blame.
I’m singing in my sleep your name.
She said, "extinguish your old flame."
I said, "she's here to light my way."
I’m singing in my sleep your name.
I wake to sing you through the day.

The repetition’s quite cathartic
The demons exit through my ear
And enter pigs. A prophylactic,
The repetition’s quite cathartic.
My heart was like a beating arctic
But what is that I see—a tear?
The repetition’s quite cathartic.
The demons exit through my ear.
©2008-2009 *YvesMB
:iconyvesmb:

Author's Comments

Gonna give the form a break, so nice to have it all in one place. A mixture of themes.
And for completeness, a set of triolet variations: [link]

Daily Deviation

Given 2009-03-13

"The repetition’s quite cathartic," notes YvesMB in Collected Triolets. The repetition is also sonically pleasing and often haunting in these eleven poems spanning everything from divorce and love to nursery rhymes. (Featured by ^SparrowSong)

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:iconkagome-kago-no-naka:
Ah these are so lovely!! (Hehe I remember reading some of these before...)

Also.. A couple of typos XD
In the 1st triolet, 5th line you->your
7th triolet, 2nd line you-> your

^.^ I really love these.. I should learn how to write them!

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i may be ugly, but they sure love to stare. ✂ ☹ ☂ ☠ ☆ ✠
:iconyvesmb:
Thanks for catching the typos; they always seem to elude me. Triolets are fun. You should definently try a couple.
:iconkagome-kago-no-naka:
Ha no problem. I definitely will! (I'll just have to look up how to write them. XD)

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i may be ugly, but they sure love to stare. ✂ ☹ ☂ ☠ ☆ ✠
:iconprincesse-dauphine:
:clap: fantastic!

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"In dreams and in love there are no impossibilities."
[link]
:iconreeanimated:
wow, this blew me away...i didn't ever think someone could pull a small detail like a bee and a hornet and pull it together as well as you did with a child being told they're too old for fairy tales and comparing a person to a mannequins, love is a nice touch too.
okay, i love the entire poem
+fave

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beLIEve [to] me like you do.
:iconsolusumbra:
beautiful....and somewhat sad...

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some people are like Slinkys. theyre not really good for anything, but i still smile when i push one down a flight of stairs. :turbopoke:
:iconaceling:
Strange... in a good way. ^^ I love it.
:iconinkripples:
GOD ALMIGHTY THIS IS ABSOLUTELY A MASTERPIECE!!!!

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" Life is a Pandora's box."
:iconleviathanofthesea:
Absolutely amazing, loved every word.

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